I think you only edit as many clunky paragraphs as he does misspelled words, Ms. Lane.
[He smiles just a touch. It's a cheeky expression, very nearly more Batman than Bruce Wayne. Lois has that effect on him from time to time. The music picks up and, true to form, he arranges his hands in a suitable pose for a waltz he has no real intention of dancing.
It's a matter of appearance.]
I admit, that is quite the remarkable feat. And is he going to be teaching a seminar on the subject?
[After a moment, he tugs her in a little closer than is strictly appropriate for a playboy billionaire and a married woman. Under the cover of the music and the dance, the fact that no one is watching them in any fashion that would merit attention or care, it's safer now to talk.]
no subject
[He smiles just a touch. It's a cheeky expression, very nearly more Batman than Bruce Wayne. Lois has that effect on him from time to time. The music picks up and, true to form, he arranges his hands in a suitable pose for a waltz he has no real intention of dancing.
It's a matter of appearance.]
I admit, that is quite the remarkable feat. And is he going to be teaching a seminar on the subject?
[After a moment, he tugs her in a little closer than is strictly appropriate for a playboy billionaire and a married woman. Under the cover of the music and the dance, the fact that no one is watching them in any fashion that would merit attention or care, it's safer now to talk.]